I am the same humanitarian, who has 5 in Russian and history, I am a winner of the Olympics, but, shit, I have been working in the oil field for 3 years and worked to the mechanic of the Navy, and before that served in the Navy for 4 years...What is wrong with me?? to

You do not lay a gap after the signs of intersection, and you forget the line between the subject-place and the narrative.